Pretty lake pic for Chris.
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Writing class update.
Handed in Clemency and got back this:
“Please tell me: why do you omit transitions and time cues? I can’t believe you think it a virtue to be deliberately obscure.”

Not really the feedback I was expecting, and much to the chagrin of almost everyone save Adam and Diane, I guess the answer is yes, I do think it a virtue.
However, there is no reason to go down with this ship so it looks like it’s time for revision number sixty-two.